User blog comment:Xaypay/How McJuggerNuggets Should Write The Next Psycho Video./@comment-5100783-20151127080330


 * Jeffrey, not "Jeffery"


 * Jeff Sr./Jeffrey Sr., not "Psycho Dad"


 * Theresa, not "Mom/Psycho Mom"

Changing those would make this much easier to read. Also, this goes a bit too extreme to be realistic. The dialog is cheesy and the fight scenes are way too exaggerated.